The Haiku at the Crossroads? PDF Print E-mail

by Klaus-Dieter Wirth


After my active participation for about 25 years in the international haiku life I dare to take stock of what I have learnt by experience. Thinking back over all those fierce arguments about the traditional 5-7-5 syllable pattern, the influence of Zen, the rejection of the “I”, the acceptance of desk haiku, the discrimination of literary devices, such as personification, comparison, metaphor, or the problematic nature of more or less mere description, So-what? ob­servations, or of a just three-part sentence, I come to the conclusion that things have changed much for the better, not least thanks to the easier interchange of ideas made possible by the ra­pid evolution of the Internet. We have witnessed an emancipation that helped a lot to widen our view well and truly beyond our nosetips. A fact that is quite characteristic of what has happened for instance in particular in German life. Well then, this is definitely the positive side of the coin!

Its other side, however, has turned out to be, in my opinion, extremely worrying. I do not even want to mention so-called spam haiku – its strength and lasting influence can simply not be argued away. One hopes that the normal reader will be able to distinguish between non-sensical or quite witty everyday garbage hitting out at topical events in politics and society. Odd­ly enough, its outpourings are nowadays easily recognizable by its strict compliance with the set syllable count!

What are the sources of danger then? First, an increasingly unjustified importance is attached to just crude realities giving readers the fatal impression that they are lacking common sense, a mark of undisguised contempt.


out of nowhere isn’t                                                                                       Marlene Mountain

a delay in large leaves                                                                                      Philip Rowland

A road crosses a road another road does not.                                                     Mark Terrill


Second, there is an ominous trend towards excessive brevity based, perhaps, on the belief: the shorter the result the better the standard of quality. Yet a telegram style will never be suited to meet any poetical requirements.


Hungover   ignorable
Jerusalem   cactus
pissing   the cats                                                                                             Richard Gilbert


ember                                                                                                              Carolyn Hall


why and
why not                                                                                                          Rajiv Lather


Third, we have to deal with a penchant for forced originality. However, extremes do not at all correspond with the spirit of haiku which does search for the extraordinary but within the ordinary! As soon as even native speakers are forced to consult the dictionary, the case is likely to be more of a definite proof that the author only put on that famous jewelled ring in order to focus our view just on itself while diverting us from the essential. The same desire for indivi­dual admiration is most probably also revealed in obvious attempts to showcase formal extra­vagances. Yet pompousness, too, has nothing to do with the spirit of haiku!


body: wash fill empty repeat                                                                             S. B. Friedman

the rumble of earthworms
seeding the clouds                                                                                           Eve Luckring

on his


mal                                                                                                                  john martone


Fourth, a continuation in this quirk is resorting to plain surrealist contents, most presumably initiated by the “Flying Popes” of the Japanese Gendai Haiku movement, only too eagerly taken up by those restless representatives who leap on every new fashion. I do not at all deny that every now and then such an example may justify its very existence, yet only in a niche of course, and never ever as a trendsetter in the market itself!


spring mud
I find a comb
left by a nymph                                                                                               Fay Aoyagi

fireflies are
eating rhinos                                                                                                Scott Metz

inside the mushroom
the canary builds its nest
of guns and ammo                                                                                           Greg Dykes


Fifth, maybe a less alarming manifestation, though rather predominant is the almost arbitrary, mostly incomprehensible use of direct juxtaposition. No doubt, at first glance this method satisfies the need of caesura, so typical of the haiku, quite perfectly. But as soon as you have the feeling that you cannot do without the help of three psychologists to figure out some abstruse mental acrobatics, any enthusiasm for the genre will rapidly die down and turn to annoyance: no reader wants to realize that he is being made a fool of.


the numbness
of scar tissue
forsythia                                                                                                          Peggy Willis Lyles

sun on the horizon
who first
picked up a stone                                                                                            paul m.

vermillion maples
a man at the bus stop
could be Odin                                                                                                 Ebba Story


All these examples have been taken from “Haiku 21 –  an anthology of contemporary English-language haiku” edited by Lee Gurga & Scott Metz (Modern Haiku Press, Lincoln, Illi­nois USA 2011). We find here a mania for running smugly free in hallucinations. It’s a public nuisance.

As things stand it has to be feared that the dagger is already drawn to stab our beloved haiku in its prime. A dangerous development in two respects: Newcomers will of course only see the present state of affairs, and as English has become the basic language for international exchange the fatal effect will be multiplied. Looking for example at the German, Dutch, French, Spanish, Italian or Balkan haiku it has not been infected so far – for how long? We surely have to have a care for the general welfare of the genre!


First published in Blithe Spirit, journal of the British Haiku Society.



Klaus-Dieter Wirth

Polyglot (German, English, French, Spanish, Dutch) and international haikuist Klaus-Dieter Wirth from Germany is an active member and collaborator of about 10 haiku societies and journals, espe­cially a regularly editorial contributor to the French GONG and the German SOMMERGRAS, co­-edi­tor of the bilingual (Dutch-English) journal WHIRLIGIG and the bilingual (German-English) In­ter­net journal CHRYSANTHEMUM. Besides his numerous publications of haiku, articles, essays, and reviews in journals and anthologies, there are two individual quadrilingual haiku books of his pen: Zugvögel – Migratory Birds – Oiseaux migrateurs – Aves migratorias (199 p., Hamburg 2010) and Sog der Stille – In the Wake of Silence – Dans le sillage du silence – En la estela del silencio (240 p., Hamburg 2013).